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Post by ryu on Feb 16, 2009 20:04:18 GMT -5
Name:Yamashiro clan
Village:Leaf
LeaderRyu Yamashiro
Abilities: Their Kekkai Genkai was called the Fire Eye. Their ability had something to do with their eyes. The Fire Eye was activated when the user saw a loved one about to die, and this would activate it. When activated, their eyes would turn red.
Stage one
In this stage, when activated the user can see through walls by looking at the heat in the next room. In this way they could see through entire buildings.
Stage two
In this stage the user can see the heat of their opponent, and are able to never lose sight of it. They could discern one person’s heat from another, thus making them able to see a comrade and an enemy from long distances away and know who is who.
(This clan is dead save for one member, who lives in Konoha.)
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Post by Matachi on Feb 16, 2009 21:36:47 GMT -5
Denied. The concept isn't a concept. They're merely stronger and know Taijutsu better, which isn't a ability, at all.
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Post by ryu on Feb 20, 2009 16:48:08 GMT -5
I edited it, WORDZ-sama.
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Post by Matachi on Feb 21, 2009 12:42:42 GMT -5
Seeing heat wouldn't allow you to predict movements. If you're seeing heat, it would occupy the same space as the user at the same time or slightly delayed after the user, there's no way you could determine someone's next movement with heat alone, to my knowledge. Also, casting heat from the eye is a bit similar to Amaterasu, I'm not sure if we should allow that.
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Post by ryu on Feb 22, 2009 1:30:03 GMT -5
Edited again. Gotta try a few more times ;D!
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Post by Matachi on Feb 22, 2009 14:30:07 GMT -5
Stage three doesn't make sense and stage four seems unnecessary. What does that chakra have to do with the eye and it's pretty much without reason, basically a "this chakra makes me faster just because" which isn't really approve-worthy. You have a really nice concept with the first two forms, maybe you should stick with those. :]
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Post by ryu on Feb 22, 2009 16:14:08 GMT -5
Just the first two? Okay, so if I edit out the last two you're gonna approve it?
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Post by Matachi on Feb 23, 2009 13:21:14 GMT -5
I'm not seeing anything wrong. Sorry for any delay. Approved.
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