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Post by blank on Nov 23, 2008 1:56:56 GMT -5
Kk. So, I'm pretty much a nub with Photoshop, and I'm learning that the more I do, the better I get. If you wanna call it "better".
So, here are my Story Line banners:
1] Original Source: SM&B
B] Original Source: FBoH
III] Original Source: G r o o v y
Four] Original Source: Major Players
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Post by Raigyo on Nov 23, 2008 2:15:56 GMT -5
Well, I'm just gonna be straight with what I say and not try to sugarcoat anything. I'd expect the same for me and my art.
Anyway...
I'll start with my favorite, G r o o v y. I like the use of color and the font you used for the "Groove." The only thing that I don't like about it would be how close Raigyo's pic is to Shikome. Nothing big, but it's just something that I notice.
My next favorite would be the Major Players one. I like that you put it at an angle instead of just sticking with the normal flat landscape style. I don't really like Kazuma's picture, cause he seems weird in comparison to the others. Like how his head doesn't go to the top, but that's my fault. I like the font, but I don't really like the transparency of it. Though, I'm not sure if it'd look better with solid text.
FBoH is the next one that I like because...I just like its simplicity. It's just Kyoushi, which is pretty much what the Tsuki storyline is all about -- her and her village. I like the colors and the textured background, makes it look like it's some kind of painting. The faded edges are cool, but it looks too rigid on the left side.
The last one, SM&B, I like it. It doesn't really impress me or anything, but it's a good coloring attempt. Not like I could do much better myself, but...I'unno. It's alright.
But, yeah. You're really improving and I can't wait to see what else you make.
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Post by blank on Nov 23, 2008 2:21:11 GMT -5
Of course you can't. ;3
But no, really, the first two were made with a black background in mind, and on here, they look nothing like what I think they should, but yeah. They're raw attempts to come from under the dependence on pro photoshoppers like Kinezumi and Tou. Had to learn to make my own stuff.
I have another one, but I'll add it later, taking all of the above in mind.
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Post by Mr. Blue Sky on Nov 23, 2008 12:03:09 GMT -5
ilma
<3
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